Ideas for my story?? :)?

Well if you want an even for something in the middle to happen I'd probably not use one. The way I'd setup the story is have the friend die, when he's in prison have him break out and then have the world be destroyed. When the world crumples up into a pile of ash then have him realize it was a huge nightmare and make it so he wakes up at the end of class with his friend shaking him awake. Sorry but that's the best I can do right now, hope it helps though!